Choose a topic for your paper and type it here:
(5 points)
Holden calls others phony, but is realy phony himself.
February 4 — thesis due
Your thesis tells your readers what point you will be making and defending about the novel.
For a guide to writing your thesis (and some examples) click here. Write your thesis here:
(5 points)
In the novel The Catcher in the Rye, by J.D Salinger, Holden Caulfield is a hypocrite. Holden always blames society, that they are changing the young minds, but he is one of the followers. Also Holden thinks everyone is phony and that is the only sane person left, but in reality he does everything that he hates in everyone else. And Holden hates when people lie and act different but he is a lair too.
February 5 — identify three main body topics
Your three main body topics are the main topics you will use to defend your thesis.
You should use at least three different subtopics (main bodies) to defend your thesis in the paper.
Many students use 4, 5, or even more main body topics to organize their papers.
THREE IS JUST A MINIMUM.
Please enter (at least) three main body topics here:
(5 points)
1)how holden blames society
2)how he calls every one phony
3) holden doesn't realize he is a phony himself.
February 6 — introductory paragraph due
Your intro paragrpah tells your readers the thesis of your paper, and briefly outlines the main body paragraph topics you will use to prove and defend your thesis. Type (or link to) your Introductory Paragraph here:
(10 points)
In the novel The Catcher in the Rye, by J.D Salinger, Holden Caulfield is a hypocrite. Holden always blames society, that they are changing the young minds, but he is one of the followers. Also Holden thinks everyone is phony and that is the only sane person left, but in reality he does everything that he hates in everyone else. And Holden hates when people lie and act different but he is a lair too.
February 7 — critical articles (secondary sources) due
You need at least three secondary sources (essays or articles about the novel written by professional critics) from which you will quote the words of the author/critic to help defend your thesis. List the titles and authors of your three secondary sources here:
(5 points)
1.) prichard 1"The Cather in the Rye"- Eberhard Alsen
2.) prichard 2"To Tell You the Truth..." - Susan K. Mitchell
3.) prichard 3"The Fallen Idol: The Immature World of Holden Caulfield" - Peter J. Seng
NOTE: It is a good idea to find more than three articles in case you change your mind about using one of them. Remember, your final paper must have a total of 8-15 quotes from these secondary sources to help you make your point and defend your thesis. These eight quotes must come from at least three different secondary sources.
February 8 — secondary source quotes
Using each of your three articles at least once, select at least 8 details or quotes from your articles to defend thesis.
YOU MUST LIST THE QUOTE, THE SOURCE OF THE QUOTE, AND THE MAIN BODY TOPIC OF YOUR PAPER WHERE YOU WILL USE THE QUOTE. List at least eight quotes from secondary sources here:
(5 points)
1) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
2) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
3) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
4) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
5) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
6) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
7) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
8) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
(Feel free to add additional quotes here, using the same format as above)
February 11 — primary source quotes
Please select at least 10 details from the novel to defend thesis Feb 11 List them here:
(5 points)
1) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
2) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
3) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
4) QUOTE:
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5) QUOTE:
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6) QUOTE:
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7) QUOTE:
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8) QUOTE:
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9) QUOTE:
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10) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
(Feel free to add additional quotes here, using the same format as above)
February 12 — outline your main body
Please arrange your 10 primary source quotes and your 8 secondary source quotes into an outline of the body of your critical paper.
In other words, list the quotes in the order you will use them under each main body topic.
If you use a word document to do this, this could become the framework for your actual paper (because you could type your own writing in between the quotes after you've arranged them in order in this outline, thus creating a draft of your actual paper).
Please post (or link to) a word document containing the outline of your main body (everything but your intro and conclusion) here:
(5 points)
February 13 — first draft of main body
Write a draft of the body of your paper for peer review.
Please create a link to this first draft, calling it (YOURNAME)'S FIRST DRAFT, as a new wiki page.
Ask at least three of your classmates to read your draft (you might need to tell them where to find it by emailing them a link).
Students will be expected to read each other's drafts and leave comments in the discussion board.
(10 points)
February 14 — peer review
List the names of at least three of your classmates whose first drafts you read and commented upon:
(5 points)
1)
2)
3)
At this point, begin revising your draft and come up with a second rough draft.
February 19 — final rough draft
Submit a paper copy of your final draft of the body to the teacher.
(20 points)
February 21 — rough draft of conclusion paragraph
Please type (or link to) the rough draft of your conclusion paragraph here:
(5 points)
February 22 — final draft of conclusion paragraph
Revise your conclusion paragraph and present a copy to your teacher today. Also, please type (or link to) the rough draft of your conclusion paragraph here:
(10 points)
February 25 — Works Cited Page due
Turn in a paper copy of your works cited page to your teacher today! Link to the Word document of your works cited page here:
(20 points)
February 27 — CRITICAL PAPER DUE!!!
Turn in the final draft of critical paper TODAY, including:
a) note cards
b) outline of body
c) all rough drafts
d) completed checklist, signed
e) final draft of paper, typed, double spaced (5-7 pgs.)
f) final works cited / references page
(100 points)
March 5 — TURN IT IN (dot com)
Today is the final day for MANDATORY submission of your final critical paper to www.turnitin.com
FAILURE TO SUBMIT YOUR PAPER TO TURNITIN.COM WILL RESULT IN A ZERO ON YOUR PAPER!
Hooray!! You're done!
Now let's have some fun making our Julius Caesar movie!
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January 29 — folder and parent signature due
January 30 — note cards due
January 31 — select a topic
View a list of potential paper topics:Choose a topic for your paper and type it here:
(5 points)
Holden calls others phony, but is realy phony himself.
February 4 — thesis due
Your thesis tells your readers what point you will be making and defending about the novel.For a guide to writing your thesis (and some examples) click here.
Write your thesis here:
(5 points)
In the novel The Catcher in the Rye, by J.D Salinger, Holden Caulfield is a hypocrite. Holden always blames society, that they are changing the young minds, but he is one of the followers. Also Holden thinks everyone is phony and that is the only sane person left, but in reality he does everything that he hates in everyone else. And Holden hates when people lie and act different but he is a lair too.
February 5 — identify three main body topics
Your three main body topics are the main topics you will use to defend your thesis.You should use at least three different subtopics (main bodies) to defend your thesis in the paper.
Many students use 4, 5, or even more main body topics to organize their papers.
THREE IS JUST A MINIMUM.
Please enter (at least) three main body topics here:
(5 points)
1)how holden blames society
2)how he calls every one phony
3) holden doesn't realize he is a phony himself.
February 6 — introductory paragraph due
Your intro paragrpah tells your readers the thesis of your paper, and briefly outlines the main body paragraph topics you will use to prove and defend your thesis.Type (or link to) your Introductory Paragraph here:
(10 points)
In the novel The Catcher in the Rye, by J.D Salinger, Holden Caulfield is a hypocrite. Holden always blames society, that they are changing the young minds, but he is one of the followers. Also Holden thinks everyone is phony and that is the only sane person left, but in reality he does everything that he hates in everyone else. And Holden hates when people lie and act different but he is a lair too.
February 7 — critical articles (secondary sources) due
You need at least three secondary sources (essays or articles about the novel written by professional critics) from which you will quote the words of the author/critic to help defend your thesis.List the titles and authors of your three secondary sources here:
(5 points)
1.) prichard 1 "The Cather in the Rye"- Eberhard Alsen
2.) prichard 2 "To Tell You the Truth..." - Susan K. Mitchell
3.) prichard 3 "The Fallen Idol: The Immature World of Holden Caulfield" - Peter J. Seng
NOTE: It is a good idea to find more than three articles in case you change your mind about using one of them. Remember, your final paper must have a total of 8-15 quotes from these secondary sources to help you make your point and defend your thesis. These eight quotes must come from at least three different secondary sources.
February 8 — secondary source quotes
Using each of your three articles at least once, select at least 8 details or quotes from your articles to defend thesis.YOU MUST LIST THE QUOTE, THE SOURCE OF THE QUOTE, AND THE MAIN BODY TOPIC OF YOUR PAPER WHERE YOU WILL USE THE QUOTE.
List at least eight quotes from secondary sources here:
(5 points)
1) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
2) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
3) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
4) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
5) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
6) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
7) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
8) QUOTE:
TITLE & PAGE:
AUTHOR:
SUBTOPIC:
(Feel free to add additional quotes here, using the same format as above)
February 11 — primary source quotes
Please select at least 10 details from the novel to defend thesis Feb 11List them here:
(5 points)
1) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
2) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
3) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
4) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
5) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
6) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
7) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
8) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
9) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
10) QUOTE:
PAGE NUMBER:
SUBTOPIC:
(Feel free to add additional quotes here, using the same format as above)
February 12 — outline your main body
Please arrange your 10 primary source quotes and your 8 secondary source quotes into an outline of the body of your critical paper.In other words, list the quotes in the order you will use them under each main body topic.
If you use a word document to do this, this could become the framework for your actual paper (because you could type your own writing in between the quotes after you've arranged them in order in this outline, thus creating a draft of your actual paper).
Please post (or link to) a word document containing the outline of your main body (everything but your intro and conclusion) here:
(5 points)
February 13 — first draft of main body
Write a draft of the body of your paper for peer review.Please create a link to this first draft, calling it (YOURNAME)'S FIRST DRAFT, as a new wiki page.
Ask at least three of your classmates to read your draft (you might need to tell them where to find it by emailing them a link).
Students will be expected to read each other's drafts and leave comments in the discussion board.
(10 points)
February 14 — peer review
List the names of at least three of your classmates whose first drafts you read and commented upon:(5 points)
1)
2)
3)
At this point, begin revising your draft and come up with a second rough draft.
February 19 — final rough draft
Submit a paper copy of your final draft of the body to the teacher.(20 points)
February 21 — rough draft of conclusion paragraph
Please type (or link to) the rough draft of your conclusion paragraph here:(5 points)
February 22 — final draft of conclusion paragraph
Revise your conclusion paragraph and present a copy to your teacher today.Also, please type (or link to) the rough draft of your conclusion paragraph here:
(10 points)
February 25 — Works Cited Page due
Turn in a paper copy of your works cited page to your teacher today!Link to the Word document of your works cited page here:
(20 points)
February 27 — CRITICAL PAPER DUE!!!
Turn in the final draft of critical paper TODAY, including:a) note cards
b) outline of body
c) all rough drafts
d) completed checklist, signed
e) final draft of paper, typed, double spaced (5-7 pgs.)
f) final works cited / references page
(100 points)
March 5 — TURN IT IN (dot com)
Today is the final day for MANDATORY submission of your final critical paper to www.turnitin.comFAILURE TO SUBMIT YOUR PAPER TO TURNITIN.COM WILL RESULT IN A ZERO ON YOUR PAPER!
Hooray!! You're done!
Now let's have some fun making our Julius Caesar movie!